This is an incredible VN. The writing is top notch and the sprites and CGs are some of the best I have seen. The concept is extremely interesting and I am very excited to see where it goes. All of the characters are very well written and each have a depth of character and emotion outside of what is explicitly told to the reader that I really appreciate. Overall this VN is incredibly good and I cant wait to see where it goes. 10/10 definitely in my top 5 VNs!
Just finished the demo and currently downloading the full (If I had any money I would've paid I promise😭) and I'm very excited for what's in store! I already love it. ✨
As I mentioned on Discord, Catherine is displaying several traits of pathological manipulative individual. The kind of person who are massive abusers. So, I hope she gets her due desert at some time.
Wow, what expectations I had were blown clear outta the water. I feel like the deluge of BS happening to Lucian in the first few chapters when things get really rolling was maybe a bit much ^^; But still a fantastic story so far that subverts a lot of visual novel expectations! Interesting brand of horror, too—not the gory kind, but the freaky weird kind. Plus some great humor moments! A good story needs a sense of humor.
I personally feel for Lucian. He has a LOT going on, poor guy, but is still called selfish and whiny—I have some shit going on and the same happens to me. It can be a bit difficult to realize when you're being selfish. I get the feeling I am far from the only one, so I think it's good to have this be a teachable theme.
Only problem I really have is that the punctuation isn't used well in places, and there are a number of spelling or word use mistakes. I'm really only bothered because such a well-written story deserves to look a little more professional ^^; I could still understand it, tho, so not a huge deal :)
Gonna keep tabs on this! Just hope it doesn't get SUPER dark....
I do plan on getting it edited at one point by someone with actual editing experience. For now though, it's too much of a task to do it myself, especially with Graven being close to done. I kind of abandoned the idea of small improvements in the previous chapters in favor of getting to the end of the story. Once there, I will finally have the entire picture and will be able to properly edit everything (or find someone who will).
As for super dark, I don't know what your definition is for that. But either way, what's a bit of darkness if there's always someone to Light your Way? 🦊
I just found an old version and played through, really intrigued, I'm so glad to see more has come out. I'm looking forward to seeing where this story goes. I'm am invested now! :3
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well that was unexpected
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Atlas!你是我的光！希望后面的剧情能多给点戏份
Chapter 8 👍
This is an incredible VN. The writing is top notch and the sprites and CGs are some of the best I have seen. The concept is extremely interesting and I am very excited to see where it goes. All of the characters are very well written and each have a depth of character and emotion outside of what is explicitly told to the reader that I really appreciate. Overall this VN is incredibly good and I cant wait to see where it goes. 10/10 definitely in my top 5 VNs!
Thanks for reading! :)
Just finished the demo and currently downloading the full (If I had any money I would've paid I promise😭) and I'm very excited for what's in store! I already love it. ✨
Thanks for reading! 🐯
这个世界观是宏大的，非常优秀的一个游戏，Darius非常可爱，我觉得他很多地方很萌，由反差带来的，lucian表现出的自私又懦弱的表现很能引起共情，不能很好的接受他人的帮助和倘开心扉（抛弃喝醉的Darius离开的一幕真的很让人不能接受），但是他有时候有些过于刻薄了，希望能让他快些成长起来，如果可以请在接下来的内容让我看到lucian和Darius一起的完美时间线，感谢作者！（英文不行，希望翻译能让你理解我的意思）
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Thank you for the heartfelt comment. The translation did well for us to understand :)
As I mentioned on Discord, Catherine is displaying several traits of pathological manipulative individual. The kind of person who are massive abusers. So, I hope she gets her due desert at some time.
Thanks for reading 🐯
Her behavior made me wish it wasn't a kinetic novel and I could pick to join the carns lol
Ok i'm a sucker for atlas, he's just too cute.
Wow, what expectations I had were blown clear outta the water. I feel like the deluge of BS happening to Lucian in the first few chapters when things get really rolling was maybe a bit much ^^; But still a fantastic story so far that subverts a lot of visual novel expectations! Interesting brand of horror, too—not the gory kind, but the freaky weird kind. Plus some great humor moments! A good story needs a sense of humor.
I personally feel for Lucian. He has a LOT going on, poor guy, but is still called selfish and whiny—I have some shit going on and the same happens to me. It can be a bit difficult to realize when you're being selfish. I get the feeling I am far from the only one, so I think it's good to have this be a teachable theme.
Only problem I really have is that the punctuation isn't used well in places, and there are a number of spelling or word use mistakes. I'm really only bothered because such a well-written story deserves to look a little more professional ^^; I could still understand it, tho, so not a huge deal :)
Gonna keep tabs on this! Just hope it doesn't get SUPER dark....
Thanks for reading 🐯
I do plan on getting it edited at one point by someone with actual editing experience. For now though, it's too much of a task to do it myself, especially with Graven being close to done. I kind of abandoned the idea of small improvements in the previous chapters in favor of getting to the end of the story. Once there, I will finally have the entire picture and will be able to properly edit everything (or find someone who will).
As for super dark, I don't know what your definition is for that. But either way, what's a bit of darkness if there's always someone to Light your Way? 🦊
This was sooo cool! Darius is also very cute....please tell me Lucian will end with him despite what Darius said...
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I've been playing furry VNs for years now, and SOMEHOW this one went over my head.
I'll outright say this one's become a fave, the art, the sprites, the general vibe, it's very very nice! I can't wait to see more!
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Just found out about this visual novel and i gotta say i love it
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your welcome
Dale con calma bro estás haciendo un buen trabajo 😎🤘👌
Gracias! 🐯
ewww
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I just found an old version and played through, really intrigued, I'm so glad to see more has come out. I'm looking forward to seeing where this story goes. I'm am invested now! :3
Thank you for reading so far 🐯
Just finished chapter 6. Looking forward to the next installment. Exciting world building!
I think if aspect exist mine will be pitch black because on what I do and see everyday
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the novel is great, but all that selfish talk feels like gaslighting the poor fox.
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We will have to look at that, although some of us don't have this issue. Thanks for mentioning it ☺️
Amazing stuff so far! Enjoying the plot and love the characters!! Each of them have so much personality.
Thank you for reading :)
just the furry design gives so much with the characters
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nsfw content?
Hello. None in terms of porn.
Can you add the windows mac and andriod tag to the downloads, so the people on the itch app can download.
Hello. We added the tags. Thanks for reading 🐯
About Darius and the tiger the mc was with, is there info on how big there are? I like rotund characters like Darius.
There is no info on that right now, but maybe someday we'll release a glossary for every character. Thanks for reading so far 🐯