Really interesting premise! The “light” is such an intriguing power. Excited to see future builds ^v^ take care and dont feel the need to rush them out
Hello! I hope you are doing well :) Ever since the update for chapter 2 my game crashes as soon as i open it :\ Im on mac and it was working great for the first chapter. I uninstalled and redownloaded but still the same issue
Omg Atlas is Leo all over again isn't he? why must I fall for every mentally unstable man!? I wanna swear I can fix him.. but I ain't got that Bob the builder in me.
I do wish there was a way to be more honest about the game without spoiling things. Personally i'm not too big on dating sims, but a nice husbando on the screen does wonders for my attention span.. So just having a romance subplot with that hunk is a huge plus. Still interested in the game, tho i'll feel a bit bad if the mc doesn't get back with him.
I have to note the itch page still lags like hell and while on my PC i barely notice, it does heat up the gpu..
Thanks for pointing out the lag. Could you come to our discord server and talk to Tito about it? He would probably want to know more so he can figure out what to fix on it.
As for the novel. It has a romantic subplot. The main theme is thriller though. I just didn't bruteforce the story line immediately with nerve-wracking suspense. I think people should ease into a story and feel taken away by it, not spoon-fed all the details from the get go, thus leaving no room for imagination, surprise and intrigue.
Thank you for reading so far! I hope you'll enjoy the next chapters as well 😊
seeing as no one else has asked the question, i figured id get it out of the way and ask first. Not that i'm looking for that kind of thing, but does this vn have or will it have NSFW content?
Hello. This Kinetic Novel will not have NSFW content. It is intended for everyone so it's on the side of SFW with a major focus on the story. Thanks for reading so far :)
One of the best intros of the many visual novels out there, I got hooked right into the end. I am loving the story so much, the art is TOP NOTCH!! The animation makes the illustrations lively, the attention to detail in the CG's are beautiful and meaningful, especially in that part where Atlas and the MC got into an argument. Everything about this game is just great!! I CAN'T wait for more. Please keep up the amazing work!! And thank you for your hard works!
Incredible start! UwU good writing, fun characters, and a very, VERY intriguing story concept~ :) tell me, by any chance, were xou inspired by psychic vampyres?
It was unexpected for a demo to be able to evoke such a range of emotions in me already. Reading that blew me away. I'm glad there's more to come because I really need to see what the future holds for Lucian.
I notice there is no romance tag, is there any plan for that in the later story? I have some hopes for what might happen with certain characters, but can also see a potentially different outcome.
Thank you for reading the first chapter. I would prefer not to divulge anything and let the story speak for itself 😊 We plan on releasing a chapter every 1st of each month so stay tuned for more!
I have no idea where the "light" plot is going for but it's interesting enough to follow. Atlas is really cute too and definitely not the main motivation nope.
After playing it, I really liked it. It was the beginning and the end of the chapter that I felt was good and many emotions were very impressive. Keep fighting and I'll be looking forward to the next update.
Version 0.6 is a fine production, but you should be aware that it drops into a loop after - I think - the encounter with Atlas. The loop encompasses the training session wit the Zebra and drops back to Atlas.
Hi there. We are aware of the issue and I believe Tito fixed it with the update. But I'll make sure to pass it on to him that some might still experience the bug. Thanks for letting us know! :)
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Really interesting premise! The “light” is such an intriguing power. Excited to see future builds ^v^ take care and dont feel the need to rush them out
Thanks for reading! We'll keep things going slowly but surely 🙂
Hello! I hope you are doing well :)
Ever since the update for chapter 2 my game crashes as soon as i open it :\
Im on mac and it was working great for the first chapter. I uninstalled and redownloaded but still the same issue
Are you using 0.2.6a? If so, can you come to the discord and message #feeback-bugs in detail?
Omg Atlas is Leo all over again isn't he? why must I fall for every mentally unstable man!? I wanna swear I can fix him.. but I ain't got that Bob the builder in me.
Very different characters. Very. Glad you enjoyed the chapters :) Next one should be out for Patreons at the end of September hopefully.
Thank God. I actually like Atlas, but he does look like an asshole rn. Hope he gets a chance to redeem himself.
At this point, is every chapter going to end with Lucian being in an uncomfortable situation with someone he has an interest in?
(I loved the chapter, looking forward to the next chapters)
Uncomfortable, maybe. But...I need to mention something. This is not a romance novel ☺️
I do wish there was a way to be more honest about the game without spoiling things. Personally i'm not too big on dating sims, but a nice husbando on the screen does wonders for my attention span.. So just having a romance subplot with that hunk is a huge plus. Still interested in the game, tho i'll feel a bit bad if the mc doesn't get back with him.
I have to note the itch page still lags like hell and while on my PC i barely notice, it does heat up the gpu..
Thanks for pointing out the lag. Could you come to our discord server and talk to Tito about it? He would probably want to know more so he can figure out what to fix on it.
As for the novel. It has a romantic subplot. The main theme is thriller though. I just didn't bruteforce the story line immediately with nerve-wracking suspense. I think people should ease into a story and feel taken away by it, not spoon-fed all the details from the get go, thus leaving no room for imagination, surprise and intrigue.
Thank you for reading so far! I hope you'll enjoy the next chapters as well 😊
Just did chapter 1. My feelings! take those back!
Glad you liked it! There's more to come 😊
i just downloaded this and omg the story is really good
Thank you for reading! 😊
hi? discord link seems expired
Hello. Please try this link: https://discord.gg/nETcWXyw7J. I also updated it on the game page. It should work now.
seeing as no one else has asked the question, i figured id get it out of the way and ask first. Not that i'm looking for that kind of thing, but does this vn have or will it have NSFW content?
Hello. This Kinetic Novel will not have NSFW content. It is intended for everyone so it's on the side of SFW with a major focus on the story. Thanks for reading so far :)
It does have a sex scene though, tastefully done (SFW) with the emphasis being on the emotional and story aspect of the event.
I love the stories with emotional connections and romance. So far it seems like this VN will not be lacking in that, even though it is SFW.
One of the best intros of the many visual novels out there, I got hooked right into the end. I am loving the story so much, the art is TOP NOTCH!! The animation makes the illustrations lively, the attention to detail in the CG's are beautiful and meaningful, especially in that part where Atlas and the MC got into an argument. Everything about this game is just great!! I CAN'T wait for more. Please keep up the amazing work!! And thank you for your hard works!
Thank you for reading! The next chapter will be out on the 01.08 for patreons and three weeks later for the public! :)
That's great. I hope the chapter uploads are consistent and nothing wrong happens for the team. Best wishes to you all!!
Nice start, curious to see where it goes:>
Thank you for reading! :)
Incredible start! UwU good writing, fun characters, and a very, VERY intriguing story concept~ :) tell me, by any chance, were xou inspired by psychic vampyres?
Thank you for reading and I'm glad yoy liked it 😊 I don't know what psychic vampyres is though.
Ah, well, it's basically just people who feed off of psychic energy :p
It was unexpected for a demo to be able to evoke such a range of emotions in me already. Reading that blew me away. I'm glad there's more to come because I really need to see what the future holds for Lucian.
I notice there is no romance tag, is there any plan for that in the later story? I have some hopes for what might happen with certain characters, but can also see a potentially different outcome.
Thank you for reading the first chapter. I would prefer not to divulge anything and let the story speak for itself 😊 We plan on releasing a chapter every 1st of each month so stay tuned for more!
That's fair enough. I look forward to being along for the ride :D
Interesting story and I'm looking forward for more to comes, especially the 'light' thing.
Glad you like it :)
I have no idea where the "light" plot is going for but it's interesting enough to follow. Atlas is really cute too and definitely not the main motivation nope.
Well, I can't give away everything from the start, else it would be boring or? Glad you like Atlas :)
After playing it, I really liked it. It was the beginning and the end of the chapter that I felt was good and many emotions were very impressive. Keep fighting and I'll be looking forward to the next update.
May the light guide you
Thank you for your kind words :) I hope the next chapters will be enjoyable for you as well.
Version 0.6 is a fine production, but you should be aware that it drops into a loop after - I think - the encounter with Atlas. The loop encompasses the training session wit the Zebra and drops back to Atlas.
Hi there. We are aware of the issue and I believe Tito fixed it with the update. But I'll make sure to pass it on to him that some might still experience the bug. Thanks for letting us know! :)