Final stretch of writing
Hello everyone,
I have finished editing all the text up to the final part of the story. I have noticed that I struggle to write endings. Maybe because that means that it will be over, but I really have to get myself together and do it.
I woke up today much earlier than usual specifically to finish editing everything I had up to now. I'm happy with my work. I have used AI to tell me where it could be better. I hate everything it tells me about my novel. It keeps making up stuff that it doesn't get. It doesn't understand why some of the characters repeat some sentences. Perhaps because people usually do that when they're sad or happy? Maybe because normal people talk that way? :) At least it corrects my punctuation here and there, so there's that.
My plan is to release Graven for Supporters first. Based on the response, I will consider changing some stuff in my novel. For example, I know that some parts drag on, but they are intentional. I think they fit well there to describe how heavy some scenes are. There are other parts that are repetitive (internal monologue) to show fixation on something. I personally suffer from this from time to time, so for me it's a realistic portrayal of how someone could be like. Others might find it dragging. I'm very much open to constructive criticism! So feel free to write in the Discord channel what you think about the novel once it's out.
The best news is that RLion now has some time off from school, and we're going to get into gear for Light My Way's Chapter 8 - "Storm". That's a tough one from the CG perspective, so I hope we'll manage to finish it up in the two weeks RLion has free.
Work is up and down for me, but if I can keep a better schedule for myself, I should be able to write more consistently in the morning which will maybe get me to the finish line with Graven.
When we post it for Patreons, it will simply just appear in the download section along with one devlog entry :)
As always, thanks for all the support you show me! I'm grateful that so many of you still support me even if I haven't put out anything as of late...
Let's hope for the best.
See you in Kazuul
-Hadrian Maximus
Graven
Gritty sfw drama
Status | In development |
Author | Bat Studios |
Genre | Visual Novel |
Tags | Black and White, drama, Furry, Gay, Kinetic Novel, Narrative, new-adult-drama, psychological-drama, Romance |
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